it was a good idea
that I don't think thurned out well
but it was your first right?
and I went a bit wrong..
so did mine..but to look back on this and see how youve improved dosent it feel good
also I like the arm blad
it gives me some ideas

your figure looks like a bondage slave

Welcome to the realm my man... and don't worry, everybody has to start somewhere right. Very original take on the character, love the weapons also. Just as you are new, don't be afraid to take criticism, learn from it and improve. Better check the tutorial on the realm, believe you me... it helps a lot to improve once's customizing skills. There you will know what are the best tools you will need to make an awesome figure...best of luck and great work man.